Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

With the advent of
technology
, communications between people have altered.
This
essay will discuss, how
technology
has
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
peoples' lives and how good it is for the
them
a cooperative unit (especially in sports)
team
. Technological advancements have a huge impact on interactions between people.
Firstly
, people are brought closer with newer ways of communications.
For example
, websites like Skype, can now let you video call a person, even if that person is miles away.
Secondly
,
technology
has resulted in easiness with new relations. As people can now make friends
online according
Accept comma addition
online, according
to their own interests.
Lastly
, the business deals has been easy for businessmen as people can now hold official international meetings from their own office through internet. The world has seen a positive
developments
Suggestion
development
with these newer ways of interactions. The new ways are less time consuming and people can get a quicker response of what they seek.
For instance
, emails have replaced letters and one can get notified about anything in due time.
Similarly
, people have access to many facilities on their
door step
the sill of a door; a horizontal piece of wood or stone that forms the bottom of a doorway and offers support when passing through a doorway
doorstep
. In example, online shopping
have saved
Suggestion
has saved
the people from going to market,
instead
they shop anything from their own home. To conclude,
technology
has changed peoples' lives, in
number
Suggestion
a number
of ways, for good.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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