You have recently ordered an item from the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter Describe what you purchased Explain why you are not happy with the purchase Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation

Respected Sir, Writing
letter to describe my dissatisfaction about a product of your brand I bought from an online shopping website. I ordered one of Bluetooth Headphones in your SONY WIO series from the Amazon on
the fourteenth
of April and received it on eightieth
objective form of "I"
days before in a good condition. When I started using it, I admired it has a really good sound quality.
, yesterday, while turning on the headphones, the power button broke off. You can imagine how surprising it felt, as the headphones are quite
expensive yet
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expensive, yet
bad quality material. I got assistance from customer service executive from the
Amazon but
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Amazon, but
he refused to give a refund or replacement, as their policy does not allow it.
is the reason I am requesting you to kindly replace my set with a new
one or
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one, or
I shall get back my refund of 100$. Hope to get a prompt reply from you. Yours sincerely, Vishwayani

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