You have recently ordered an item from the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter Describe what you purchased Explain why you are not happy with the purchase Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation

Respected Sir, Writing
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a product of your brand I bought from an online shopping website. I ordered one of
Bluetooth
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Headphones in your SONY WIO series from the Amazon on fourteenth of April and received it on
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i.e. two days before in a good condition. When I started using it, I admired it has a really good sound quality.
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, yesterday, while turning on the headphones, the power button broke off. You can imagine how surprising it felt, as the headphones are quite expensive yet have
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Amazon but he refused to give a refund or replacement, as their policy does not allow it.
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is the reason I am requesting you to kindly replace my set with a new one or I shall get back my refund of 100$. Hope to get a prompt reply from you. Yours sincerely, Vishwayani
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