Eating too much sugar is harmful for our health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In our contemporary world, the health problems that stem from

overconsuming

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sugary thingies, are commonplace amid

people

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the people

. Who myriad of people think the responsibility of

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acute situation of tends to be government.

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, as adherents of alternative idea which advocates that individuals ought to take care

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of

themselves on their own, my personal sentiments are not on par with the former notion.

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essay will bring both sides into light and draw appropriate conclusion. Perhaps it should be acknowledged that, governments are contemplated as major organization that are supposed to provide their dwellers with food and medical aid and

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is a very reason of placing the responsibility to the authorities. Meaning that, if governments had not

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supplied

their markets with sweets which contain much sugar in it, consumers would not have been damaged by them. They,

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, are inclined to make a decision by themselves about purchasing them and

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aspect

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can not

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be true in terms of decisions individuals make.

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, putting blame on the government for

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healthy

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health

problems would not be reasonable.

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, even the markets in the country is abound with sugary products, customers could deter themselves from consuming them whenever they have a sense of its adverse effect on them. To illustrate that, if

person

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a person

the person

is confronted with obesity he can tackle with the problem via keeping

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a diet

from sugary products on their own not on the level of the state or global. By that I mean, health issues tend to be personal and they should be addressed by individuals. The conclusion to be drawn is that, by the virtue of the limiting the amount of the sugar people eat by government may be

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a remedy

the remedy

for the health

problems but

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problems, but

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these difficulties

this difficulty

and eradicate them completely, individuals should pay attention by themselves.