Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way. Do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that, presence of plethora of
sorts of
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sorts, of
leisure
time
activities
baffle
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baffles
to select one of them to choose and person has to assort them not in terms of interests but challenge that they bring. My personal prospective would be hundred
percent on
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percent, on
par with
this
concept and
this
essay will divulge the cogent reasons of that contribution and draw plausible conclusion. Above all, the prime purpose of the hobbies tends to kill
time
and eradicate the boredom. People always make
attempt
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attempts
to avail the
time
killing benefit of hobbies that makes them feel as they invest their
time
efficiently
instead
of just squandering.
Furthermore
, hobbies should not have only appealed
them but
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them, but
also
salutary adequately for the persona. To elucidate that more, work out, which is one of the most prevalent leisure
time
activities currently, can be a perfect example, in which sportsman tends to build his endurance through hard activities. Perhaps, it may seem
challengeable
to
do but
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do, but
if it was not people would have already forsaken that. Because, people have always been interested
with
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in
the activities that sharpen their abilities or difficult enough that deserve to cope with.
Moreover
, insufficiently difficult tasks, that are not able to draw the users attention
completely
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completed
, cannot be great hobby, because ideal hobbies are supposed to make the persona to concentrate fully on
single task
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a single task
, which arouses a sense of flying
time
.
For instance
, reading
book
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books
, that open new gates to the imaginary world, can
brings
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bring
a reader
to
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into
its world that
eligibly
qualified for or allowed or worthy of being chosen
eligible
accelerate the passing of the
time
.
Consequently
, it will be beneficial for the reader’s brain and may be
pretty
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a pretty time killer activity
time
killer activity as well. The conclusion to be drawn is that, if hobbies had not been not only interesting but
also
difficult as well, it would not bring
feeling
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a feeling
feelings
of satisfaction on persona and would have been renounced.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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