In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that government should not allow salaries above certain level. Discuss the view and give your opinion.

Every

employee

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receives

salary

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based on their skills and work experience which is the common procedure. In many countries, a fewer number of people earn extremely high salaries, some people believe that

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good for the

country whereas

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country, whereas

others think that

government

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the government

should fix a

salary

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range above which the

employee

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shouldn’t get paid. Many people believe that a smaller group of people earning higher salaries can contribute to the country’s development in

form

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the form

of taxes. These smaller

group

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groups

can help in maintaining the

economical

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economic

pyramid balanced.

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: if a company is in the process of hiring a candidate for the job, the company would definitely hire someone who has

good level

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a good level

of experience in the field. Certain people demand higher salaries, while not only benefits the

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employee but

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employee, but

as well as the employer in the long run.

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it is necessary to give a higher amount of

salary

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for

deserving

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the deserving

. There

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are

have been

always two sides to a coin, though the former statement clearly explains the need for higher salaries, there are people who

wants

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want

equality in the

salary

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range which is not practical. Not every fresher and manager

are paid

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is paid

equally in any sector.

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: if a candidate is offered the work of managerial duties and was paid very low income, he wouldn’t prefer to take the job, because there is a heavy demand in the work load.

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would affect the company and

it

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

indirectly it affects

nation

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the nation

as well. In

conlusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

, every

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employee regardless

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employee, regardless

of their group,

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either smaller or larger should be paid according to their ability and performance. In my opinion,

it

it is

it's

always good to get paid based on the performance.