In many country wedding are getting bigger and expensive than past. Why is ths case and is this a postive and negative development ?

Nowadays
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marriages get bigger and
costly
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more costly
costlier
than ever before it in many nations. It has
trend
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trended
among society to show their status by spending
money
on
wedding
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a wedding
the wedding
weddings
.
However
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celebrate those
occasion
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occasions
has
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have
are having
both good as well as
bad thing
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a bad thing
on
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in
about
a person's life. There are numerous reasons behind
this
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First
and foremost
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today people have
alot
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a lot
of choices to celebrate marriage functions according to their
interest whereas
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interest, whereas
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in the
past they
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past, they
had only one choice to enjoy
this
is that at home
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Secondly
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,
everyone
want
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wants
to show their status in the community so that they spend
large amount
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large amounts
a large amount
of
money
on those wedding by using different type of cousins
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organise live performance and many more things which attract the people. Apart from
this
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,
people
have became
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have become
workholic
person with a compulsive need to work
workaholic
. They do not have enough time to get together which make their bond stronger
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As a result
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they celebrate different functions spend
money
on it.
Furthermore
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celebrations those
occasion
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occasions
has
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have
both positive and negative effects among individuals and society
.
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Firstly
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due to global
culture people
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culture, people
forget
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forgets
their own
culture
and customs
.
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They follow western
culture
which is not
wrong thing
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a wrong thing
in
this
modern era but it is the
ons
an onerous or difficult concern
onus
ones
one
of both government and parents to touch with their own roots
instead
of
anothers
any of various alternatives; some other
another
culture
.
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Last
but not the least
,
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is is
the good
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the best
method to make
realtionship
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a relationship
relationship
the relationship
relationships
strong because people met each others and share their happiness and sorrows with them
.
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In conclusion
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in
this
hectic world celebration is best idea to enjoy the life with
eachothers
a theatrical performer
actors
each others
.
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It is the duty of people do not spend enough
money
to celebrate those
function
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functions
in which they face the problem of debt.
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