Question. Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree?

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A growing number

of people believe that prisoners should be allotted community work without being paid for the same rather than imprisoning them. I totally disagree with

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fact as

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situation allows the culprit to move freely in the society.

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also encourage

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also encourages

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without fearing the law.

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, offenders ought to stay behind the bars for serving the punishment. Law and order are equal for all the criminals.

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, without being biased about the circumstances, due to which the

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occurred or considering the severity of the misdeed, prisoners should bear the ramification of their misdemeanour.

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, a thief, if asked to perform the job of a

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paid, then

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his propensity would be to mug other people in the surrounding area.

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way, he might

reoffend

cause to feel resentment or indignation

offend

or become a threat to the society because of the financial issue or the habit of stealing.

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, imprisonment

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serves the purpose of setting an example to the community. Lenient rules and regulations often lead to upsurge in the

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rate. To illustrate, if a person commits a heinous

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of vandalism and moves

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freely

in the public

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places, then

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may encourage other people to follow the same strategy as they are well aware that they would not be given any serious punishment. To conclude, lawbreaker should be confined to prison for

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a specific amount

time according

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time, according

to the severity of the

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committed by them.

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will give a sense of safety to the victim as well to other people.

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, it will be a paradigm to remember by the society, which will ultimately aid to lessen the overall

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ratio.

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