Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In a corporate world, it is a standard hiring procedure to collect the personal details of prospective employees
such
as how do they spend their leisure time, and what is their marital status. Some people support
this
argument as they believe that
this
practice would help employers to find the most suitable candidate for vacancies.
However
, others hold the narrative that
this
approach could enforce talented candidates to not apply for a job as they believe that it would compromise their privacy. In
this
essay, I will illustrate both of the arguments and give my own opinion. On one hand, proponents of
this
approach argue that as it is essential for an employer to find the perfect match amongst a vast number of applications received for a position and often
this
task is given to a hiring team who requests personal
information
before recruiting a candidate. They opine that several jobs require people to work in a rotating shift environment and in
this
regard employers often look for a candidate who does not have any reservations to work
in nights as well
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nights as well
as in the evenings. For
such
kind of positions, employers often prefer a person who is not married and does not have family commitments.
For instance
, research suggests that in order to enhance the productivity I.T companies prefer to recruit those candidates who are single and who have an interest in computer technologies.
As a result
, they argue, that not only candidates focus and fulfil their responsibilities
diligently but
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diligently, but
being an unmarried person allows them to work flexibly
such
as in nights or on weekends.
On the other hand
, detractors have their own viewpoint and they put forward the argument that the major drawback of
this
policy could be the decline in the talent pool of any country. It is no secret that people do vary in their nature, some are affable while the others are reserved and generally do not like to share their personal
information
with their friends and colleagues. In
such
situations, asking the prospective employees about their personal
information
could prompt them to drop their application for a job despite their abilities and relevant skills which would be the loss of society.
For example
, research conducted on human
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
suggested that a vast majority of professionals
is working
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are working
in the informal sector because they are reluctant to share their personal
information
and term it as a breach of privacy. In conclusion,
although
collecting personal data of candidates may help employers
to get
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get
the most suitable employee.
However
, I believe that employers should obtain the consent of candidates before getting their personal
information
and that it should not be made compulsory which
as a result
could provoke many skilful candidates to look for other opportunities.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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