Some people think planes are the better mode of transportation between cities, while others believe trains are better. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some say that planes are better means of transport when travelling between cities while others argue that trains are the better ones. Though ticket fare in trains
are
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is
cheaper, I believe that planes are
faster
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fast
enough to reach the destination in short span of
time
. On the one hand, it is believed that trains are economical and costs are exceptionally low compared to
airplanes
. As the trains are funded by the government and
also
it includes only the basic
travel
fare unlike the taxes
such
as goods and services tax and other
amenities
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amenity
charges included in aircrafts tickets.
For instance
, the average train fare for a passenger from Chennai and Delhi is around 900 INR, whereas the same costs to around 15,000 INR in
airplanes
.
However
, I believe that despite the fact they are cheaper, planes are preferred as they help to reach different cities in no
time
.
On the other hand
, considering the
time
taken to
travel
between the cities, planes are always preferred as they
travel
at high speed.
This
is because the planes
travel
on an average speed of 1500 km/
hr whereas
Accept comma addition
HR, whereas
HR whereas
the train travels nearly 400Km/
hr
(short for Human Resources) - the set of individuals who make up the workforce of an organization, business sector, or economy.
HR
her
,
therefore
they reach longer distance in less
time
compared to trains.
For instance
, if a person travels from Chennai to Delhi, it takes about 3 hours while on a train it takes nearly 3 days. I am of the view that planes
reduces
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reduce
people’s
travel
time enabling
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time, enabling
them to reach longer
distance
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distances
in less
time
. To conclude, while trains allow people to
travel
between cities in low cost, I believe that planes are considerably faster and saves people’s
travel
time
to a great extent.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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