Some people say that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

Experts over decades have had debates about
educting
give an education to
educating
children at
home
or in an institute. In
this
essay we shall see the benefits of both ways and give relevant examples. Children at young age need
lot
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lots
of attention.
This
helps them in developing the required intellect to
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
, observe and adapt to the learning world. Getting
this
support at one's own residence gives them a sense of comfort and relief. In a recent survey done by ABC news states that
home
schooling is proving to be more efficient in terms of gaining knowledge.
On the other hand
, the advanced education system being followed by today's schools and other institutes
canot
can not
cannot
can't
be understated. These platforms have developed an empirical
methods
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method
and procedures which focus on an overall growth of its students. Research done by Axial University states that the Io of students from public schools is far better than the children who are being educated
at
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in
their
home
.
On the contrary
, I believe that education provided in schools has a major impact on the
students
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students'
student
student's
development rather than teaching them at
home
.
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