It is sometimes thought that people who travel outside of their own country are more tolerant and understanding of others. To what extent do you agree?

Many hold the opinion that those who have visited multiple countries are more culturally enlightened and can adapt to others
a lot
in contrast
, to those who have not. I fully agree with
statement. For the remainder of
essay, I will discuss the reasons why travelling abroad allows different people to co-exist peacefully.
, when someone goes abroad during the holidays, they have higher exposure to other people and traditions.
, any stereotypes that they have encountered in the past can be set straight.
is because, people often tend to believe things once they live through them.
For example
, in 2014, my Swedish friend, Ellen, moved to the Middle East, at
she had a very negative misconception about the
of or relating to or supporting Islamism
, after one year of living there her views changed entirely, she even dated a
of or relating to or supporting Islamism
man, due to the fact that, she understood the religion and its followers in much more detail. Undoubtedly,
gives a person the upper hand in human interaction.
never leaving your home town gives you an in depth understanding of your own society, travelling allows people to expand their minds to
be agreeable or acceptable to
different languages, cultures and music. In turn, learning things you would usually not know through the internet or through books.
For instance
, I was
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
unaware of the cold personalities of
German people
the German people
and thought that they were simply rude and unwelcoming. That was
up to, before the time
I visited Germany in 2016.
, my views changed 100% and I learnt to appreciate their professionalism and monotonous speaking. Overall, there are many misunderstandings when it comes to acknowledging other individuals' cultures, especially when there is no direct exposure to them. In conclusion, visiting other nations paves the way for easier global communication and social enlightenment.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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