One of your friends invited you for a meal with his/her family in their home. You enjoyed the meal and had been happy to be introduced to his/her family. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, .thank your friend and say that you enjoyed the meal • say what else you liked about this visit • ask your friend to meet you someday at a restaurant
Dear Kim,
I hope you are well. I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for a nice dinner with your family members yesterday.
To begin
with, I was so pleased to be invited to a family dinner yesterday evening. I did not expect to have a very great conversation with your siblings and have fun. I should mention that your mother is brilliant at cooking international dishes , especially sushi and fish. I can definitely say without any doubt that the meals were the most flavourful ones I have ever eaten. Linking Words
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why, I would like to thank you.
Another thing I should tell you is that your family is very hospitable and friendly. They treated me in a pleasant way. Your house is quite cosy, comfortable and conveniently located in the heart of our town. Linking Words
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reason, I did not struggle with arriving there.
I am willing to introduce my family to you and it would be an honour for the family to meet you. Linking Words
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reason, I would like to invite you to a new traditional restaurant at the weekend if you have some spare time. I hope you will come and like the place.
I look forward to hearing a prompt reply from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
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Your letter shows a good structure with a clear introduction, development of ideas, and conclusion. However, to enhance logical structure, consider adding transitions between paragraphs for smoother flow. Phrases like 'Furthermore', 'In addition', or 'Moreover' can help connect your ideas more cohesively.
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You've done a great job in maintaining a suitable tone throughout the letter, which is friendly and appreciative. To further improve, include more specific details about the visit that left a positive impression on you. This can make your letter more engaging and personal.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea which is excellent. To further improve, ensure that every paragraph not only presents the idea but expands on it with examples or further explanation. This will enrich the content and make your letter more compelling.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite