Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give opinion.

The atmospheric issues, according to
few people
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a few people
the few people
, should be solved nationally. Whereas,
rest
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the rest
of the individuals believe,
that is
should be dealt with on a more larger, like global scale. In my opinion, a problem of
such
vast extent should be handled both, on a larger as well as on a smaller scale. Countries like United States, India, China, etc., should unite themselves to fight
this
issue by banning
usage
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the usage
of certain hazardous materials.
Infact
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In fact
,
this
is not the
first
time, when countries will have united to combat with a bigger problem. In the years between 1980 and 2000, the ozone layer started depleting due to
few
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a few
extremely fatal gases
excreated
eliminate from the body
excreted
from air-conditioners and
refridgerators
white goods in which food can be stored at low temperatures
refrigerators
.
This
worldwide phenomenon lead to unifying of the nations showing that it definitely did wonders
then
, and it will not fail us
this
time. It is necessary to fight atmospheric issues nationally by imposing certain laws and encouraging environment-friendly adaptations. Laws for industries like paper and wooden furniture are already instilled, in which they have uprooted for the manufacturing of their products.
This
sort of nature-friendly law will bolster the recovery of our sick planet. In my opinion, an
issue so
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issue, so
big can only be eradicated if it is fought at a worldwide extent and
also
at a minute
scale
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scale, such
such
as
country-wide
occurring or extending throughout a country or nation
countrywide
countywide
countryside
because if the world is not united or if a country does not cooperate
then
there will be no one who can save the planet Earth. In conclusion, people
favoring
promote over another
favouring
globally scaled solutions and equally correct to
ones
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the ones
who prefer country scaled solutions and unifying those people’s opinions will boost the recovery of the climate.
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