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Some people think that in order for hobby to be enjoyable it needs to be difficult in some way. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #hobby
Hobby
Suggestion
A hobby
 is something that you love doing in your free time and I feel, it is someone's
hobby
 because he or she likes doing that activity. When a person enjoys something he does not find it difficult. So I completely disagree with the notion that
hobby
 should be difficult if you want to enjoy that. The most important consideration is, if you choose something difficult as your
hobby
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hobby, then
then
 you might lose the interest in pursuing it. Rather than enjoying it you might feel exhausted, which results in quitting that particular
hobby
.
For instance
, if someone chooses his
hobby
 as bodybuilding, which includes heavy weight lifting and tough exercises like
push-ups
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pushups, then
pushups then
then
one
 can easily find it cumbersome and can leave that after a few days.
In contrast
, if the
hobby
 is easy and something which
one
 loves
doing
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doing, then
then
 it will be more fruitful.
For example
, if someone's
hobby
 is
walking
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walking, then
then
one
 can start with a few kilometres of walking and might proceed
further
 gradually depending on stamina.
Also
, the person feels motivated by seeing progress in terms of physical and mental fitness. Which helps them to continue with the
hobby
.
In addition
 to
this
,
one
 can choose a difficult
hobby
 only if they have strong will power to pursue it. To recapitulate, a
hobby
 is something which
one
 enjoys, so choosing a difficult
hobby
 might lead to quitting that when
one
 is not able to achieve desired results.
Therefore
, everyone should start with easy
levels
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levels, then
then
 they might take it to more extreme levels, which helps to keep them motivated.
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