You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decided to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.

Dear Martin, Hope you are recovering from the
injures
any physical damage to the body caused by violence or accident or fracture etc.
injuries
.
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.
We feel very bad for not being with you at
hospital
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the hospital
. I have a good news for you, Our Team won the Cricket
match
, hurry.As a main batman of our team you are incomparable and reliable. Most of our members accept that
you
of you or yourself
your
hardwark and
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hardware, and
hardware and
passion is something that motivate
every one
all people
everyone
in the team.
Unfortunately we
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Unfortunately, we
missed your presence on
this
match
. Through
this
match
our team got a chance to participate in upcoming finals and that what we dreamed
for
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of
about
. I know you will be excited to know about the
match
.
Best thing
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The best thing
about the
match
was the weather, It was perfectly fine for the
match
. From the Tossing opposite Team got their batting
first
. Our target score
were
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was
578 and by the end by losing 5 wickets we got 579.Even though the
match
was tough at starting it
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became
smooth at the ending. We are eager to see you again, awaiting for your Prayers
are
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is
always with you. Get well soon, take care. Yours Sincerely
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