Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

In
modern era
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the modern era
, advertisements play important role in
sale
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sales
the sale
and marketing of all products. Some people believe that the advertisement
influense
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
influenced
to buy products while others argue that they provide
imformation
a message received and understood
information
about new items.
This
essay will show partial
aggrement
the statement (oral or written) of an exchange of promises
agreement
towards both the views. To start with, advertisements are vital to
market
the
product
because of them only people know about
uses
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the uses
and
availibilties
the quality of being at hand when needed
availabilities
of any item in the
market
. The role of
commerical
connected with or engaged in or sponsored by or used in commerce or commercial enterprises
commercial
adds is to attract people and help raise of sale.
For example
: if a
product
caters need of
teenager
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teenagers
the teenager
, the
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
should be created in
such
a
way
that it pull these age
cotagory
a collection of things sharing a common attribute
categories
consumer
to purchase that
product
.
That is
the magic of advertisement, despite being
unuseful
, it
market
in
such
a
way
that
consumer
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the consumer
a consumer
believe
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believes
that they requires
this
product
, without them it would be very difficult to
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
desire
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desired
results.
Furthermore
, they are important to describe features, advantages and area covered by
new addition
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the new addition
in any
product
.
Also
, helps in
rising
increasing in quantity or value
raising
awareness about any new
product
and its corresponding target consumers.
For instance
: recently, in India, many companies
launch
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have launched
air
purifies
an apparatus for removing impurities
purifiers
, which are not there in the
market
so without advertising
this
product
, how
comparies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
could tell use and
benift
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
?
and
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And
create
consumer base
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a consumer base
for niche products. Many adds represent details, in a
way
that, it
describe
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describes
all feature of the
product
and help viewers to know what extra
this
product
can do. In
nutshell
Suggestion
a nutshell
, these mean of spreading information about the products
ultimatly
as the end result of a succession or process
ultimately
benift
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
consumer
and
market
both because
product
manufacturers know what missing in the
market
and customers know
what
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what's
available in the
market
. In traditional
way
this
two
way
comunication
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
was not possible.
Hence
advertisemnet
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
plays the role to bridge between both.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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