It is believed by some that people should take a yearly driving test in order to ensure safety on the roads, while others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In recent times it has been seen that road accidents are surging day by day. It is considered by many that evaluation of one's driving skills should be done by taking
driving
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a driving test
the driving test
test
yearly.
which
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Which
in result will ensure safety on roads.
However
, others think that it is not required. In my opinion, Driving
test
evaluation is not required as it is already done when a person received the license.
Firstly
, if these tests
started
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started, then
then
It will make the situation worse. As we know that in present scenario,
for getting
dismiss from the mind; stop remembering
forgetting
their license, people have to stand in long queues and wait for many days to
finally
have their licence.If
this
evaluation starts
then
these offices will be more crowded than
ususal
occurring or encountered or experienced or observed frequently or in accordance with regular practice or procedure
usual
and people might face additional problems.
Secondly
, Driving is a skill, If once owned by
someone
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someone, then
then
its with them for
lifetime
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a lifetime
. So, they need not to take
test
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the test
a test
again to show that they know how to
drive
.
For example
, a recent survey by traffic police showed that the people with licences
drive
more carelessly in comparison of the people without having all required documents.
In addition
to that,
instead
of taking these driving tests again to ensure
safetly
the state of being certain that adverse effects will not be caused by some agent under defined conditions
safety
safely
, people should be taught basic rules and regulations to
drive
on highways. If they are aware of
simple guidelines
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the simple guidelines
like when to overtake and when not and educating them about sign boards might lower the risk of accidents.Hoardings should be there to keep
them reminding
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them, reminding
of their family at home waiting for them.
For instance
, a study revealed that
such
teachings and
campeigns
a race between candidates for elective office
campaign
has reduced the rate of
mishappenigs
to 20%. To recapitulate, individuals should be taught about traffic sign boards and guidelines to
drive
safely on
road
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the road
instead
of taking
driving
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the driving test
test
again and again.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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