It is Generally Accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays people generally

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

and accept that

excercise

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

is good for children and teenagers. Because of

this

mindset, there is a common talk going on, to make the physical

education

and sport should be made compulsory for all students in all

school

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schools

. I would agree with the point of making the physical

education

and sports compulsory for all students in all schools across

country

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the country

. In

current generation

Suggestion

the current generation

, technology booming is one of the major

advantage

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advantages

and at the same time it

also

creates a major problem. Teenagers nowadays are more addicted to the video games and spend their most of the times on the same after their

school

hours. There

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are

phsycial

involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

physical

activities involved. Even at the

school

, management

are

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result oriented. So they make students only to study without engaging them in any of the sports during the

school

hours. Recently, one of the teenager who is very good at the academics had a severe health issue as there is no physical activity made by him. His routine was to wake up in the morning, go to

school

, study for all 8 hours, come back home, play video games and go to bed. Even the

school

he studied has no separate period for sports and physical

education

. Schools should give an equal importance to the physical activity and sports as same as that they give importance for studies. To conclude, Every

schools

Suggestion

school

should make the physical

education

and sports to be mandatory for all the students. Government should

takes

Suggestion

take

have taken

necessary actions

Suggestion

schools who fails to do

this

. As schools

plays

Suggestion

play

a major role in

students

Suggestion

student

student's

life as they spend more time in

school

rather than at home. Each and every

school

should be more responsible in

students

Suggestion

students'

student

health by making physical

education

and sports to be mandatory.

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physical health
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