It is Generally Accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays people generally
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
and accept that
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
is good for children and teenagers. Because of
this
mindset, there is a common talk going on, to make the physical
education
and sport should be made compulsory for all students in all
school
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schools
. I would agree with the point of making the physical
education
and sports compulsory for all students in all schools across
country
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the country
. In
current generation
Suggestion
the current generation
, technology booming is one of the major
advantage
Suggestion
advantages
and at the same time it
also
creates a major problem. Teenagers nowadays are more addicted to the video games and spend their most of the times on the same after their
school
hours. There
is
Suggestion
are
no
phsycial
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
activities involved. Even at the
school
, management
are
Suggestion
is
result oriented. So they make students only to study without engaging them in any of the sports during the
school
hours. Recently, one of the teenager who is very good at the academics had a severe health issue as there is no physical activity made by him. His routine was to wake up in the morning, go to
school
, study for all 8 hours, come back home, play video games and go to bed. Even the
school
he studied has no separate period for sports and physical
education
. Schools should give an equal importance to the physical activity and sports as same as that they give importance for studies. To conclude, Every
schools
Suggestion
school
should make the physical
education
and sports to be mandatory for all the students. Government should
takes
Suggestion
take
have taken
necessary actions
on
Suggestion
to
schools who fails to do
this
. As schools
plays
Suggestion
play
a major role in
students
Suggestion
student
student's
life as they spend more time in
school
rather than at home. Each and every
school
should be more responsible in
students
Suggestion
students'
student
health by making physical
education
and sports to be mandatory.
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