You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level

Dear sir / madam, My name is Liya and writing
this
letter to express my interest and
enquire
inquire about
inquire
about your one-week walking
tour
package in the mountain. I received a brochure for a trip to the mountains. So, would like to collect some information regarding your trip. I am very excited about different types of risky or dangerous games that you will arrange for getting more enjoyment like mountain climbing,
paragliding
Suggestion
Paragliding
, skydiving etc.
Moreover
,
last
year I skipped a
tour
that was
also
included different
verities
a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
varieties
of games, so I need to enjoy these holidays very well
.
Accept space
.
I would
also
appreciate if you could provide some details regarding the
tour
arrangement like
price
Suggestion
the price
of the
tour
,
Accept space
,
place
,
Accept space
,
mode of travel
,
Accept space
,
food and accommodation
,
Accept space
,
and especially about the dates because I need to submit leave application in my office
.
Accept space
.
I would
also
like to express my concerns about my health condition, because
last
month I faced a breathing problem
that is
because of dust allergy, so I need to know that place selected is suitable for me. I look forward for your replay and my decision will
also
be
accordance
Suggestion
accorded
with your response. Yours faithfully Liya
Submitted by Liya on

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