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Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays,
money
 is one of the most significant materials in our lives.
To
Suggestion
For
 many people, it is appropriate to marry for
money
 rather than
love
.
However
, I believe that
both
love
 and
money
 should be
bouncetogether
Suggestion
bounced together
bounce together
 in any marriages. Certainly,
money
 is an important part in our lives [TS]. It is hard for any persons to accept a partner which* does not have
money
 or at least a job to take care of future family.
Hence
, said “marry for
money
”
also
 has
its
the thing named or in question
it
 right in some extent.
However
,
love
 should be the root of any marriages [TS].
Firstly
, it is because
love
 is
such
 a glue to connect two persons which have their own lives, become one (NC). So, they can share each other’s the sadness, happiness to overcome any difficulties in daily lives.
Moreover
,
love
 makes people growing up because they do not only have
responsibility
Suggestion
a responsibility
 to themselves, but
also
 to their partners as well.
That is
 why marrying with
love
 is always encouraged. In my opinion, I think that
both
love
 and
money
is
Suggestion
are
both
 necessary [TS]. Marriage relying on
money
 would be rapidly disintegrated when unfortunately the
money
 is
run
Suggestion
running
 out. In contrary*, marriage relying on
love
 would sometimes come to end when they could not earn
money
 to carry out family (NC),
such
 as paying bills, buying food, etc.
Therefore
,
love
 and
money
 should stand together in marriage even though their contribution could be unbalanced (NC). As we have seen, marriage without either
money
 or
love
 would come to an unhappy
ending
Suggestion
end
. So I believe that they
both
 have their own contribution to a merry family.
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