In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?

It is true that young single people prefer leaving to work or study rather than staying with their parents until they get married. In my opinion,
advantages
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the advantages
outweigh the disadvantages of
this
trend. On the
one
hand, there are many beneficial aspects of living on
one
's own.
Firstly
, it brings responsibilities
such
as shopping or paying the bills, and these make people learn how to manage their budget.
Secondly
, these kinds of responsibilities push a young bachelor to get mature, and individuals develop a broad perspective for various situations. Taking responsibility brings analytical thinking together, because it requires planning and implementation for daily
life
.
Third
advantage is the freedom of development of
one
's own
ruleset
release, as from one's grip
release
and applying them.
For instance
, as individuals, young people want to behave according to their own requirements
instead
of their parents'. Staying with parents would include the compliance of parents' rules.
However
, in their own environment, youngsters would adjust their rules and find their way to live, which leads for all their
life
.
On the other hand
, some people believe that there are disadvantages of bachelor living. Living on
one
's own means being alone at home, and previously shared housework will be required to be done alone.
However
, in today's world, the household appliances are mostly developed, and the housework will not take too much time. As a
second
disadvantage, leaving parents means earning money for a living and it is thought as early at that
ages
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age
.
However
, for a
one
-person living, a part-time job would be adequate, and will not steal from the time to study.
For
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In
the other case, individuals
already leave
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have already left
are already leaving
home to work and be on their own feet. In both cases, the work
life
is beneficial for the bachelors
to make
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make
their own
life
. In conclusion, I believe that leaving home before getting married and having
one
's own living has many advantages outweighing the disadvantages.
Submitted by brk_guney on

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