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some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school than secondary school

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Language
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 is the most important tool for communication
,
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and is different in parts of the world
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Even local areas of same countries have their own local languages
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So in order to
communite
transmit information
communicate
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 and learn efficiently you must know the specific
langauge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
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Most of the people speak their mother tongue very
fluently but
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fluently, but
 when it comes to other
langauge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
 they are not able to communicate so well
r
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
 reluctant to take part in conversation.Now
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 has become
international
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the international language
an international language
language
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 so most of the educational institutions are emphasizing on learning
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 in early
life
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 so that children do not have any problem in their
professuinal
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
life
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 Man is
social animal
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a social animal
 and is gifted with receptive mental abilities. These learning abilities are at their peak in early
life
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 so
this
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 is the best
stage
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 that could help us overcome the
language
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 barrier
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Although
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 most of
th
definite article
the
 children speak their local
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language but
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language, but
 some experts
bilieve
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
 that primary
school
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stage
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 is best
stage
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 where they should start learning
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 or any foreign
langauge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
 because their learning abilities are
peak
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peaking
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if
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If
 they learn
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 or any foreign
language
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 at primary
school
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stage
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 they will will be confident in their secondary
school
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stage
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They will confidently take part in all educational and
extracuricular
outside the regular academic curriculum
extracurricular
activities
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activities, hence
hence
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 they will flourish and even if they go abroad for
further
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 studies or job
purpuse
an anticipated outcome that is intended or that guides your planned actions
purpose
purposes
perhaps
 they will be
prefferred
made ready or fit or suitable beforehand
prepared
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on
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On
 the other hand student student learning
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 or any other
foriegn
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
lanuage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
 in
secondary
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a secondary school staff
a secondary school stage
school
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stage
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 will not learn
it efficiently as
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it as efficiently as
 their mind is not as much receptive and they
also
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 have more burden of studies as compared to primary
school
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 group
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so
to a very great extent or degree
So
 they will not take part actively in different conversation as compared to primary
school
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 groups and even grades are
low as
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low, as
 they
can not
can not
cannot
 cope with
lengthy
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long
 and
dificult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
salybus
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so
to a very great extent or degree
So
 the analysis concludes that the experts who believe that learning
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 at primary
school
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 are right as children who learn
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 at primary
school
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 have more
advanteges
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
advantageous
 as compared to other
grourp
any number of entities (members) considered as a unit
group
groups
 they are more successful in all stages of
life
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and and
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
 have more
oppurtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
opportunity
 of learning
communation
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
.They are more successful in professional
life
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