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Some people think that children benefit from the TV and they should spend much time on it, but others support that children should not watch TV. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Regarding whether or not children should watch television, people have polarized opinions. In my view, moderate usage is beneficial for them, but extreme usage may be harmful. There are several reasons why it could argue that these programs have positive impacts on kids. The main benefit is that it can help them to expand their horizons.
For example
, by watching discovery channels, young people are able to get a better understanding of our planet, including nature and wildlife. Another positive effect is that some educational programs aim to develop their language skills. By watching these channels, they could expand vocabulary as well as improve their listening skills.
Finally
, news sections are
also
 an effective way for students to gain real-
time
 information around the world. In spite of the above positive effects, I support the idea that children should not spend too much
time
 on
this
set
the piece of land on which something is located (or is to be located)
site
. If screen
time
 become the main part of their life,
then
 children, especially students, have less
time
 for their academic study.
This
 means that excessive usage of TV might lead to dissatisfied grades in school or even perhaps drop out of school.
In addition
, compared with outdoor sports,
this
 entertainment might cause damage to their
healths
a form of whist in which players avoid winning tricks containing hearts or the queen of spades
hearts
. It is no doubt that we should lead an active lifestyle
instead
 of a sedentary lifestyle, which is a damaged result of televisions. In conclusion,
although
 children can benefit from some programs on televisions, I believe their screen
time
 should be controlled by parents or teachers.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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