Some people believe that now days we have too many choices. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #choices

The

revolutionar

markedly new or introducing radical change

revolutionary

advancement in

moder

belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages

modern

technology has

endowerd

provided or supplied or equipped with (especially as by inheritance or nature)

endowed

human race

Suggestion

the human race

with

substancial

fairly large

substantial

resouces

available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed

resources

available to live in the best possible way. In

this

era, one has

number

Suggestion

a number

of options to avail in every aspect of daily life. I totally agree with the idea and I think, exponential positive changes have been made in food, travelling and business.

Firstly

, due to advanced method of food processing

Accept space

human population is able to enjoy different kind of eatables, that means, our mode decides the meal we eat, from organic to fast food but

hte

definite article

the

scarcity is not a problem in

list

Suggestion

the list

Also

, better preservation techniques have promised round the year

avaiability

the quality of being at hand when needed

availability

variety

Suggestion

a variety

of vegetables, fruits, irrespective of the seasons.

Suggestion

For

instance, now you can buy mangos in a supermarket in

winter

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the winter

, while its the fruit of

ummer season

Suggestion

the summer season

summer season

Secondly

, transport technology has made the world a global village and has brought people closer to each other. That means, now we have different options available to

chose

Suggestion

choose

from,

such

as rail, air or bus to

travely

change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically

travel

by, depending on the affordability and at our own ease. It

also

has provided business opportunities for the new

enterpreniur

someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it

entrepreneur

and easy product accessibility to consumers.

For example

, now we can buy an

iphone

Suggestion

iPhone

in Pakistan,

although

it is made in the USA. To summarize, it is an undeniable fact that, human of the twentieth century

are far more advanced

Suggestion

is far more advanced

in the technology, education and health which has opened the doors to uncountable resources being

avaialble

obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service

available

to them, which no man has enjoyed in the history.

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