Some people believe that now days we have too many choices. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The
revolutionar
markedly new or introducing radical change
revolutionary
advancement in
moder
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
technology has
endowerd
provided or supplied or equipped with (especially as by inheritance or nature)
endowed
human race
Suggestion
the human race
with
substancial
fairly large
substantial
resouces
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
available to live in the best possible way. In
this
era, one has
number
Suggestion
a number
of options to avail in every aspect of daily life. I totally agree with the idea and I think, exponential positive changes have been made in food, travelling and business.
Firstly
, due to advanced method of food processing
,
Accept space
,
human population is able to enjoy different kind of eatables, that means, our mode decides the meal we eat, from organic to fast food but
hte
definite article
the
scarcity is not a problem in
list
Suggestion
the list
.
Also
, better preservation techniques have promised round the year
avaiability
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
of
variety
Suggestion
a variety
of vegetables, fruits, irrespective of the seasons.
Fo
Suggestion
For
instance, now you can buy mangos in a supermarket in
winter
Suggestion
the winter
, while its the fruit of
ummer season
Suggestion
the summer season
summer season
.
Secondly
, transport technology has made the world a global village and has brought people closer to each other. That means, now we have different options available to
chose
Suggestion
choose
from,
such
as rail, air or bus to
travely
change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
travel
by, depending on the affordability and at our own ease. It
also
has provided business opportunities for the new
enterpreniur
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneur
and easy product accessibility to consumers.
For example
, now we can buy an
iphone
Suggestion
iPhone
in Pakistan,
although
it is made in the USA. To summarize, it is an undeniable fact that, human of the twentieth century
are far more advanced
Suggestion
is far more advanced
in the technology, education and health which has opened the doors to uncountable resources being
avaialble
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
to them, which no man has enjoyed in the history.

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