Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

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Advertisement is a tool that helps

consumer

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consumers

the consumer

to identify a

product

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or service. It is a way of sharing a story about a

product

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or service. History shows that

story telling

The act or practice of telling stories

storytelling

had been a part human evolution. The method which has changed since the days of cave paintings to today’s graphic designing. Companies, brands have been using

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concept since the idea of consumerism have been established, probably even before the paper was manufactured. In my opinion advertisements helps us to know about new products. Today we see advertisements on various platforms like print media, radio, television, internet and social media. There are myriad formats of advertisements too; like commercials, posters, banners, hoarding, radio jingles, online ads,

influencer

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marketing etc. I personally love short commercials which

tells

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tell

us a story. The recent Dove commercial which reflects women empowerment is a brilliant ad campaign. They shared stories of different women from different walks of life across the globe and never did they mention their

product

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except at the end. The ad was a success as it was an awareness project which ditched the old idea of beauty and that women in today’s world is capable of doing any work.

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, another ad which caught my attention was Coca-Cola promoting its “Avengers” can

launched

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launch

during the release of the new “Avengers” movie.

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It's

simple talked about its new

product

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using the recent trend. Another great Indian campaign was “A drop of life” on polio drops was the pivotal success in putting India on the map of

polio free nation

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the polio free nation

polio free nations

. In conclusion, I would like to say advertisement is a beautiful art that helps us to know

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about

different things around us and we always have a choice to make the right decision for ourselves regarding a purchase. We really cannot blame

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

advertisements.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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excessive
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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

Fully explain your ideas

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Social interaction between people is destroyed by technology. Do you agree or disagree.

Young people are often influenced by their peers. This is called peer group pressure. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The tourism industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years, and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.