Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, children are being taught to be

better memeber

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a better member

better member

better members

of

society

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. While some people contend that parents should teach their children to be good, others deem that it is the role of

school

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. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion. Teaching a

child

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to be

better member

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a better member

better members

in

school

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has advantages.

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, teachers can help a student to socialize with friends.

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is

becaues

for the reason that; on account of

because

school

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is a learning place, and it contains many different students from various

backgound

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backgrounds

background

.

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, a

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school houses

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school, houses

wider range of people with whom students can interact, which helps to have

better perception

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a better perception

of good and bad.

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, a

child

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gets understanding on how to be a good member of

society

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in

school

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.

In other words

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, when students spend

majority

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the majority

a majority

of their time in

school

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, they get influenced by their

surrounding

the environmental condition

surroundings

, which often affects their understanding.

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, learning

in

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at

home

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to be

helpful member

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a helpful member

of

society

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also

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has its merits.

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of all, it becomes easy for

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child

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children

a child

the child

to learn at

home

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.

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is due to the reason that children can easily express their feelings at

home

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, which makes them comfortable.

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, children often have

easy time

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an easy time

learning good habits with their family because they have a close relationship and no hesitation among each other.

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,

behavior

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the behaviour

behaviour

of a

child

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is

also

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the responsibility of parents.

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happens because children are more likely to imitate their parents, so if parents are well-behaved, children may automatically become well-mannered. In conclusion, while learning in

school

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may have benefits like

socailizing

the act of meeting for social purposes

socializing

easily and better understanding, teaching in

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home leads

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the home leads

to comfortable environment and closeness with family. In my opinion, I think family should teach their

child

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to be a better

memeber

one of the persons who compose a social group (especially individuals who have joined and participate in a group organization)

member

of

society

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.