Some people believe that it is beneficial to play sport in a team rather than playing an individual team. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, new sports and games are taking the world over. While some people believe that these games should be played in a
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, others trivialize
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this practices
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this practice
these practices
. I tend to agree with the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
argument, and in
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essay, I will discuss both views with examples. On the one hand, those who believe
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-work is significant contends that a teamwork usually brings
synergetic
used especially of drugs or muscles that work together so the total effect is greater than the sum of the two (or more)
synergistic
benefits.
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is because different members share assorted skills, and they often contribute to the final outcome.
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, a
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in an organization often consists of people from different departments;
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, they have varied abilities, and they may contribute to the overall
effeciency
the ratio of the output to the input of any system
efficiency
efficacy
of an organization.
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, according to them, working in a
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is effortless. Due to the fact that all members share risk and contribute
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, they deem any form of challenges become
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easier
.
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, in my opinion, working in a group promotes group-think. In fact, despite the fact that a person is creative, he should act in accordance
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direction, so talents are usually
supressed
kept from public knowledge by various means;
suppressed
in a group. Another reason could be that
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team work
cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)
teamwork
often involves pluralistic ignorance, for individuals tend to avoid
cruicial
of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
tasks and think it as others responsibility.
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, a person in a
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, who finds a task tardy, is likely to shun it, and he may act as a free rider. The reason for
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is people often circumvent
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jobs they
find boring;
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, while working in a
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, they have someone to blame or rely on. In conclusion,
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team
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-work promotes consolidated benefits and increased
effeciency
the ratio of the output to the input of any system
efficiency
efficiencies
, we must take into consideration the group-think and ignorance, which may engender from
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conduct.
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, I tend to support the individual work over group work.
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