Levels of young crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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The number

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crime

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crimes

that happened which contributed by young generation and teenagers are increasing

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a faster rate

compare

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compared

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time.

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is one of the serious phenomenon that occur in our daily life.

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essay will demonstrate some of the reasons which associated with

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problem and provide some methods to avoid it.

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and foremost, one of the principal

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reasons

for the rapid increase in the levels of youth

crime

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is arise

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arises

from

parents behavior

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the parents' behaviour

parents behaviour

parents' behaviour

parents' behavior

. Parents play an important role in

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child

child's

children's

development. Other than that,

children personality

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the child's personality

child's personality

children's personality

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affected

by their parents. If parents are unable to show their responsibility

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their children, perhaps,

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will result in lack of communication and put their children in a high possibility of

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developing

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risky

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manner of acting or controlling yourself

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as commit

crime

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, most of the children will commit

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to make their parents put all the concentration on them, which due to children are neglected in these days. One of the possible solution to avoid

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problem is conduct some after-school activities

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for

children. Government and school can collaborate together to

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hold

some community service activity for children to participate. Owing to

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, children can spend their free time wisely

instead

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commit

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committing

crime

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. To illustrate, while joining service club, children are able to understand how difficult our life is and become an optimist person who will not commit

crime

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. In the conclusion, it is important for parents to educate their children and put more effort on their children. Government should

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provide some methods to prevent

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kind of problem.

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