In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this so? what can be done about this problem?

Despite the fact that farming methods and
yeild
be the cause or source of
yield
has increased dramatically over the
last
century, still millions are devoid of
food
. In my opinion, social, economic and political reasons are behind
this
foreplay, rich nations and international organizations can play a role to curb
this
issue.
To begin
with, due to the difference of the purchasing power among the people, the ultimate victim of
this
so called
food
scarcity is poor. Whether they grow or not, the rich will ensure they have enough on their platter, but the poor will suffer from hunger due to lack of
this
purchasing power. If the subsidies are not provided, even eatables will be out of the reach of a common man.
Secondly
, climate changes
affects
Suggestion
affect
the
yeild
be the cause or source of
yield
of crop and
consequently
, the availability of
food
.
For example
, drought has affected the many parts of the African peninsula, several regions have not seen any rain over the years, so they unable to grow their own
food
and are dependant on the grain
provions
the territory occupied by one of the constituent administrative districts of a nation
province
provisions
by
othe
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
the
parts.
Also
, some countries are not willing to share their water resources, making other at
verge
Suggestion
the verge
of hunger and drought,
for instance
India has constructed the dams on all the rivers flowing through its borders, making Pakistan
vulnerbale
susceptible to attack
vulnerable
to drought in the near future. To tackle
this
unacceptable problem, governments can make sure that enough is available to all its residents, irrespective of wealth distribution among
people
Suggestion
the people
. There should be a
food
regulatory authority and special discounts should be offered to poo ones.
Also
, rich countries should be encouraged to
provides
Suggestion
provide
the surplus to needy ones. International
ogranizations
a group of people who work together
organizations
can
also
reach out to
remot
located far away spatially
remote
areas and help bring people out of poverty. To conclude, in the twenty
first
century, when
human race
Suggestion
the human race
is planning to set foot on the other planets and billions of dollars are spent to seek alien, out there in the universe, people sleeping hungry in our own planet, earth, put a question mark on our moral values. The world bank and other international
monetory
relating to or involving money
monetary
monitoring
agencies should make sure, equitable resources for all.
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