You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: • explain why you changed your previous job • describe your new job • tell him/her your other news

Dear John, I am fine here and hope that you are
also
sailing in the same boat. I am writing
this
letter to share with you the exciting news of joining a new job. As you know, I was looking for a new job in New York City,
therefore
, when I got the job offer, I immediately accepted it. Albeit I liked my previous line of work,
however
, I was stuck
at
Suggestion
in
the same position since
last
two years and wanted to do something else to enhance my skills. Working as a software engineer, my new employment is really exhilarating as the work environment and the new colleagues are amazing.
Moreover
, I have already made three new friends who live nearby my new house.
Besides
this
, I am eagerly waiting to show you my new apartment that I have bought recently. Apart from being near my office, it is sufficiently spacious for my family too. I am confident that you will
also
like it. I hope that you will visit my new place soon. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Lovingly, Amanjot Singh.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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