In spite of the advances in agriculture,many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case? What can be done about this ?

With the advent of science and research, newer improving strategies have been introduced in the field of agriculture.
, despite of these advancements a large share of
worlds population
the world's population
world's population
is still deprived of food. In my opinion global warming plays the key role in
and I would recommend introduction of new laws regarding
protection. Global warming, the major contributing factor for adverse climate change, leads to a decrease in crop production.
For Instance
, In April
year, flood and thunderstorms have declined the state's revenue drastically, owing to the mass destruction of almost over 35000 acres of land in Pakistan. Following
look, it is clear that a far less crop production results from global warming which in turn causes food shortage. While looking out for solutions to tackle the situation, I personally feel that governments should impose laws that play a protective role
Earth's environment.
For example
, a recent research shows that the cultivation revenue was quite larger in the past
century when
Accept comma addition
century, when
we had a better climate and less global warming. So even if we make laws now, we can protect our planet from worst environmental changes and
as a result
can decrease the number of people suffering from hunger. To conclude, it is evident that how climatic variations have been linked to crop production and food shortage while following rules and regulations for saving
the environment
from global warming can
hunger and
a shortage of rainfall
across the world.
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