People sleep less than before in many countries.Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and on society?

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Sleeping is a natural condition and benefits the body and the mind
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however, dramatically
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do not sleep enough because
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the rapid life rhythm and the countless responsibilities
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Lack of sleep can have negative impacts in
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in the whole
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due to tiredness. The average time of sleep for an adult is eight hours per day, in order to be fully
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cause to be alert and energetic
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do not understand the importance of sleep and they skip it
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so they will win some extra time.
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, long working hours, family responsibilities and anxiety are some of the factors that prevent people from resting
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, a research showed that 60 % of people sleep at least 3 or 4 hours per day because they need to do a lot of things
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so they postpone their sleeping.
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not enough sleep can lead to alarming health problems
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involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
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Sleeping habits can determine problems
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for both individuals and
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, individuals that are not resting well will be less productive
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mentally tired and they will not take right decisions.Obviously that will affect their
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environment
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their family relationships and
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their own feelings and health.
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Secondly, society
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will be harmed, because when the employers are tired the transactions are slower and the quality of
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unsuitable and
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will lead to critical problems.
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, a study showed that a company has lost fame and money because, the employers
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not longer productive due to
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long
hours at
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sleep is valuable and it should not be avoided or diminished in order to
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more. In conclusion
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limited hours of sleep can harm a person and a community.Responsibilities, should not take a person sleeping
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hour
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because that will have
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health problems and
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it will create crucial issues in a
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