Topic- Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages for Children. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant example from your knowledge.

Nowadays, due to burgeoning technological advances
,
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,
alot
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a lot
of
television
programs are being aired and
as a result
, juveniles watch more
television
than in the past.
This
essay will discuss the merits and demerits, more so, includes some examples
from
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of
my knowledge. Undoubtedly, there
are
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is
plethora of benefits watching
television
nowadays than in the past. These
includes
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include
,
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,
Educational benefits. To elucidate,
alot
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a lot
of
television
channels are dedicated to Childs education. They have programmes
situable
meant or adapted for an occasion or use
suitable
in
inclucating
teach and impress by frequent repetitions or admonitions
inculcating
vast helpful knowledge in children.
For instance
, watching carton network and
nickledon
channel at
early age
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an early age
helped me in learning and understanding some basic
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
vocabulary in school.
Furthermore
, it helps in learning western cultures. To illustrate, juveniles constant exposure to western cultures on
television
,
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,
helps them to learn the good aspect of
western
a film about life in the western United States during the period of exploration and development
Western
culture
such
as their mode of dressing and diet. A recent study by the US has shown that a
television
broadcasting company Intel world has drastically reduced children food gluttony by 60% due to their program on healthy diet.
On the other hand
, the demerits of children spending more time on
television
nowadays than in the past
includes
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include
,
firstly
, increase in juvenile
deliquencies
nonpayment of a debt when due
delinquency
. To expatiate,
alot
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a lot
violent program aired on
television
encourages children to engage in crime. In the past children have no access to
such
programs leading to less crime.
Secondly
, it lowers academic performance.To elucidate, nowadays due to
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
much time spent on
television
by
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with
kids,
thier
of them or themselves
their
performance in academics
are
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is
lower than it was in the past.
Lastly
, less engagement in physical exercise,
as a
result children
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result, children
nowadays are more obese than in the past. These
has
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have
lead to various health challenges that arises
as a result
of obesity
such diabetes and
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such as diabetes and
hypertension. To sum up, nowadays children watch
television
more than in the past.
Nevertheless these
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Nevertheless, these
has
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have
postives
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positive
positives
sides
such
as learning
of
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about
western culture and educational benefits.
In addition
, it has a negative
sides
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side
such
as increase juvenile
deliquencies
nonpayment of a debt when due
delinquencies
delinquency
, lowering
academics
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academic
performances and so on.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

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