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me believe that it is the reponsibility of the people to care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of environment. discuss both views and state your opinion.

#reponsibility #people #care #environment #government
The destruction of the environment is one of the major challenges that
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humanity is facing. There is a common belief in the public that it is
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 government’s responsibility to look after the environment,
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 some other individuals argue that the
people
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saving
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nature.
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 is an important organization that has
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total control
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 the national resources and
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 are the first responders to any environmental challenges that a country can face. If a nation is losing the green cover and if the
people
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pollution levels,
then
 it is a result of wrong policies that were
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 by the authorities. Governments should control
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deforestation, illegal mining and the excessive use of fossil fuels
while
 encouraging the use of alternate power sources.
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, countries like India and China have the highest ratio of green cover when compared to some of the developed countries and
that is
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were implemented to save
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nature. Even though the authorities have a primary and
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critical role to play, the general public
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 the deciding factor for any program to be successful.
People
 must take care of the local surroundings by not polluting them with
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garbage and at the same time, they should plant more trees to increase the green cover. If
people
 do not take part actively in the revival process, no matter what the government does, the result
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 be still a failure.
To conclude
, in my opinion, the government and the public are equally responsible
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 saving
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nature. Only the combined effort will yield the desirable results.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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