Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

Foreigners, who struggle with learning the unfamiliar
language
spoken by locals, are considered by many people to be faced with social and practical issues. In my opinion, I agree with
this
view as
such
individuals struggle with isolation and other detrimental problems. Most foreigners who are unable to speak the common tongue of the new country find it difficult to make acquaintances and
this
results in isolation.
That is
, owing to their difficulty in communicating with the locals, most foreigners are unable to create new relationships and,
as a result
, they are isolated and fall into depression.
For instance
, considering the recent survey conducted in tertiary institutions, the hike in suicide rates amongst the French speaking students have been attributed to depression. These students are unable to form relationships with the native English speakers and
this
leads to a poor mental health due to segregation.
Also
, Immigrants, who find it difficult speaking the local
language
, prefer to purchase desired items from online stores
instead
of the local market.
Instead
of purchasing items from a nearby market, these individuals rather resort to making orders from the internet which incurs more expenses and exposes them to fraudsters.
For example
, considering their poor
language
skills, many foreign students admit to purchasing basic items,
such
as toiletries, from online stores
instead
of a nearby market. While
this
method may be considered convenient, it
is has been referred
Suggestion
is referred
refers
to as the reason why students are increasingly falling prey to internet fraud.
This
alternative is admittedly more expensive as it involves charges
such
as delivery. In conclusion, the inability to speak the native
language
of the residing country makes foreigners suffer from mental challenges, fall prey to fraudulent activities and opt for more expensive alternatives to purchasing desired items.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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