Some people believe that arts such as painting and music do not improve people’s lives and therefore government should not spend money on them. Instead the government should spend money on science and technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

One school of thought holds that

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subjects do not contribute to developing human skills in

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so the state does not need to expend money on them,

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others believe that they should be funded for

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and

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.

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essay attempts to shed light on both the merits and demerits of

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tendency perspective before concluding that I am in favour of the latter notion. On the one hand, If the government does not have the budget for

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,

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and

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could be disadvantageous to some extent.

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, it will reduce the opportunities for self-development of

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lovers.

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, there is no market and businesses to develop for them to try and experience if the government does not provide and creative a foothold for them. Meanwhile, the government has the responsibility to invest in

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and

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.

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that they have

a better living standards

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.

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, they must have the basic amenities to be able to enjoy

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other experiences

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as the arts in

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.

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, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced that investing in arts like painting and music enriches cultural heritage and enhances quality of

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. One rationale is that

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could improve human creativity.

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is because individuals are free to be creative with

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and images to create their signature pictures

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their painting and talent. Another justification is that

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helps a country to develop economically.

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, arts have a significant economic impact by attracting tourism, creating jobs, and generating revenue. Specifically, museums, concerts, and

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galleries often become cultural landmarks that contribute to the economy. In conclusion,

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it is irrefutable that

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and

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play a vital role in social

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, I would contend that it is impossible to deny the value that

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brings to our lives.