The Restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs governments billions of dollars while this money should have been used for new housing and road development.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?

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is an undeniable truth that with increasing economic growth

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country

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government

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the government

extracts the revenue to spend on deteriorated buildings and spend a mere amount on new projects.

lnstead

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Lnstead

of completely renovating these institutions the authorities should plan for some new infrastructure

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taking

view

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the view

that building place has no symbolic importance and is

builded

(used of soaps or cleaning agents) having a substance (an abrasive or filler) added to increase effectiveness

built

for public need.I

am firmly agree

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firmly agree

have firmly agreed

with

this

statement and elucidate my view in following paragraphs. The

first

and the foremost reason in favour of new construction is that it will cost less than to destroy and rebuild.One has to introduce more force in case to destroy a building.

This

will cause

more economical

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more economic

burden.

Moreover

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extra

time

is needed for renovation purpose.So

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restoration process

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the restoration process

is more

time

consuming than for new construction.

In addition

this

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there is wastage of material in the former process

instead

it is always better to use that capital,

time

and force

into

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new construction.

On the other

hand if

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hand, if

the building is a symbolic place or a Heritage

site

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site, then

then

government

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the government

must take

care

of the situation and decide

accordingly

because these sites have some historical importance.

Also

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the guiding authorities is must take

care

of public convenience like educational institutions and hospitals.These

institution

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institutions

need proper

care

and

also

must be renovated

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time

. In conclusion

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I conclude that

government

should encourage new infrastructure to get

developed but

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developed, but

also

government

must take

care

of historical sites and public convenience.

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The Restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs governments billions of dollars while this money should have been used for new housing and road development.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people , while others believe they don’t

The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having having a range of subjects is better for children's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, tourists and scientists are allowed to travel to remote natural environments. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answers and include example from your own experience?