The Restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs governments billions of dollars while this money should have been used for new housing and road development.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?

t
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T
is an undeniable truth that with increasing economic growth
of
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by
country
,
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,
government
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the government
extracts the revenue to spend on deteriorated buildings and spend a mere amount on new projects.
lnstead
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Lnstead
of completely renovating these institutions the authorities should plan for some new infrastructure
,
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,
taking
view
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the view
that building place has no symbolic importance and is
builded
(used of soaps or cleaning agents) having a substance (an abrasive or filler) added to increase effectiveness
built
for public need.I
am firmly agree
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firmly agree
have firmly agreed
with
this
statement and elucidate my view in following paragraphs. The
first
and the foremost reason in favour of new construction is that it will cost less than to destroy and rebuild.One has to introduce more force in case to destroy a building.
This
will cause
more economical
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more economic
burden.
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
extra
time
is needed for renovation purpose.So
,
Accept space
,
restoration process
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the restoration process
is more
time
consuming than for new construction.
In addition
to
this
,
Accept space
,
there is wastage of material in the former process
instead
it is always better to use that capital,
time
and force
into
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in
new construction.
On the other
hand if
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hand, if
the building is a symbolic place or a Heritage
site
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site, then
then
government
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the government
must take
care
of the situation and decide
accordingly
because these sites have some historical importance.
Also
,
Accept space
,
the guiding authorities is must take
care
of public convenience like educational institutions and hospitals.These
institution
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institutions
need proper
care
and
also
must be renovated
on
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in
time
. In conclusion
,
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,
I conclude that
government
should encourage new infrastructure to get
developed but
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developed, but
also
government
must take
care
of historical sites and public convenience.
Submitted by naresh on

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