Topic: - Nowadays people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss

In present competitive
scenario people are
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scenario, people are
compelled to
work
for longer hours,
therefore
they have left with less
time
for their family and friends. I believe that long working hours
is
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are
the negative trend. Working for long hours have serious impact on our development. People might think working for long hours enhance the
productivity whereas
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productivity, whereas
it is proven that
work
over load
become overloaded
overload
causes exertion and stress in employees which reduces the productivity.
Firstly
,
work
over load
become overloaded
overload
is one of the major reasons of health disease in employees these days
such
as heart attack, depression, stress etc. As consequences of that employees are not able to put their full efforts in their respective office
work
.
Secondly
, working for
longer
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long
hours
also reduce
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are also reducing
are also reduced
is also reduced
their concentration level and interest in the
work
, on account of which they take long
time
to finish the job. According to the latest study by
World Health Organisation
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the World Health Organisation
,
number
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the number
of people suffering from depression increases on ground of
stressful life
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a stressful life
.
Moreover
, people who spend more
time
in office they get less
time
for themselves, certainly their personal and social relationships get
disruption
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disrupted
.
For instance
, Parents who
work
for
longer
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long
hours in office get less
time
for their children because of that they are not able to take proper care of their young ones and their emotions. By the reason children these days are not much emotionally connected to their parents as
earlier
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early
.
In addition
to that, nature of solitude has developed in the people and their social life has diminished. To conclude, there is absolutely nothing to prove that long working hours improve productivity. Long working hours not only reduce your capability to
work but
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work, but
also
ruin your personal emotions and family life.
Submitted by naresh on

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