Should people get a job after school or should they attend university? Discuss both and give your opinion.

Career progression has always been a difficult choice to make for any individual. Most students have to face all important question of What after school? While it is sometimes thought that students should work right after their schooling, others believe that students should continue to focus on university
education
. In my opinion, jobs after schooling will help the students will help to gain practical knowledge. On the one hand, some people think,
working environment
Suggestion
the working environment
will give the students a great insight as to what is expected from them from the real job market and
this
will particularly help them to sharpen their skills
further
when they pursue
education
at a later stage in life.
In other words
, students will be in a better position to select the subject of specialization since they now know what work they are doing and what they actually want to be in their life.
Furthermore
, they will understand the value of money and they will be able to finance their own higher
education
and able to contribute the monetary burden of their parents.
On the other hand
, it is often believed that students should continue with their academics as it is very difficult to secure a job in
this
competitive world, with just schooling. Certain professions,
for example
, lawyers or doctors require specific knowledge of their respective streams
this
is not possible without
university
Suggestion
a university education
education
.
Additionally
, for certain students it is difficult to study after their
jobs
Accept comma addition
jobs, thus
thus
it is better to complete the
education
all
at
Suggestion
in
one go rather than switching to jobs and coming back to study. In conclusion, people may vary in their opinion, I think that gaining practical experience is very important to help students understand what is expected out of them
also
it will aid in their decision making for higher
education
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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