Some people think that mothers should spend most of their time raising their family, and therefore the government should support them financially. Do you agree or disagree?

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Now days

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women have equal job opportunities as men

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however

many ascertain that women and

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

those who have children need to stay at home and

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pass time in a specific way

spend

spent

spends

a huge amount of their time raising their family

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and getting financial

support

from the government.I totally disagree,

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for the reason that; on account of

because

i

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believe that a woman can be independent and earning

money

and at the same time being a mother. On one hand

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when a woman is not working but

instead

staying at home raising the children that can have a positive impact to the

familly

a social unit living together

family

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In addition

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children need someone to take care of them so a mother can

support

them both physically and mentally

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by staying by their

side she

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side, she

can always protect them and teach them good manners and how to behave properly.

Moreover

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in order to have a

wealth

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wealthy

life some financial

support it

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support, it

is needed

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government should

support

mothers by giving them a monthly salary so they will be able to raise

ther

of them or themselves

their

the

her

children without worrying about

money

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On the other hand

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every woman wants to be independent

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in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

having their own job and

money

and be able to

support

their family.

Therefore

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having a family is not easy and it requires a lot of

money

to cover all the necessities

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for

this

reason working mothers have the right to be a part of the workforce.

Consequently

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they will be able to help with the bills

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provide a

good

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better

life quality

to

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for

the family and

also

have a career. In conclusion

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the act of spending or disbursing money

spending

time with the family is

essential but

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essential, but

in order to survive it needs financial

support

either from the government or by

employed

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employing

mothers.I disagree that mothers should stay home because they deserve a place in the workforce.