In recent years, the family structure has changed ,as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative.

Nowadays, the composition of the family is different from what it used to be.
Also
,
this
change includes family responsibility.
This
essay will discuss the changes that are happening, while making a case that these changes are advantageous.
Firstly
, everything is prone to one for of change or the other, and the family is not an exception. It can be observed in recent years that financial obligations in a
home
is jointly shared
Suggestion
are jointly shared
by the couple.
This
was not the case many years back, as
this
responsibility was solely on the man.
For example
, in a survey by the central bank of Nigeria, (C.B.N.), it was observed that the number of joint accounts opened by couples has risen by 70% in the
last
20years. And
such
accounts are used to finance the
home
.
Furthermore
, most women are now career mothers, making
house wife
a wife who manages a household while her husband earns the family income
housewife
almost non existent. Case in point, the ministry of woman affairs in Nigeria conducted a survey and revealed that 80% of married women have their own career, as against 25% 10years ago. In my opinion, I believe these changes are positive because, financially, more money is brought into the
home
and
this
will relieve the husband of some monetary problems.
For instance
, the bills in the
home
can
divided
Suggestion
divide
. While the father foots the children's education, the mother can pay the house rent.
Although
, being a mother and having a full time job can be a
herculean
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Herculean
task for the woman. I believe the financial reward outweighs
this
set back. In conclusion, family arrangement and responsibilities have changed over the years owing to the fact that most women have full time employment and contributes financially to the
home
. It is
also
evident that these changes are advantageous.

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