Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Seeing a
movie
is a fantastic way to relax and whether
one
does that on the phone or in a
cinema
, is up to the individual. While some are of the opinion that, films are better watched on the phones, others believe cinemas offer more
exciteful
movie
experience.
This
essay, will discuss these views and give reasons why people perceive either of them as best. Some people say that, watching a
movie
on your phone or tablet saves
one
the unnecessary expenses associated with doing
same
Suggestion
the same
, in a
cinema
.
For example
, to see a film in a
cinema
may cost about 15 GBP while you could download and watch
same
Suggestion
the same movie
movie
on your phone at a very minimal cost of less than 5 GBP.
Also
, watching a
movie
at the comfort of your home offers more relaxation, as well as flexibility.
One
could lay on the bed, while watching a
movie
or even walk around the
house but
Accept comma addition
house, but
in a
cinema
,
one
has to quietly sit in
one
position, to see a
movie
.
Furthermore
, seeing a
movie
on a tablet gives
one
more control, as the individual can play and pause the
movie
at will
unlike
open the lock of
unlock
in the
cinema
. As true as the above reasons are, a number of persons prefer to watch movies in cinemas. They argue that, there are some blockbuster movies that are available, only in cinemas and by the time
such
movies are publicly available, the hype and the vibe is gone.
Also
, going to the
cinema
with family or friends is a good way to bond and have a great time together, as well as create lasting memories.
For example
, my romantic life with my ex, kicked off at the
cinema
while we watched the film, "50 shades of grey". In my opinion, cinemas are the best places to see a film, especially if the
movie
is a blockbuster and as
such
, not readily available on the internet.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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