It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the
intergration
of technology and society has brought the increased use of the the action of incorporating a racial or religious group into a community
integration
internet
. Many people believe that it is a useful way of remaining in contact with others, however
, some believe that it is a way of spreading false information. Both views will be discussed before an opinion is reached.
Through the spread
of the internet
across the globe, many see this
as a way to bring the community closer. In the past, the cost of phone calls and time taken to send letters, meant that it was harder to stay in contact. However
, with the internet
, social networks such
as Facebook and Whatsapp have provided the means to stay connected for a less price. To illustrate, people in India are able to call and send messages to those halfway across the globe in an instant.
On the other hand
, as the popularity of social networks start to grow, one of the main problems which arise is the spread
of fake news. As the internet
has no censorship in most places, no one is there to monitor what is being spread
. For example
, in India, fake news has been prevalent due to the increased use of Whatsapp. As a result
, innocent people have been killed due to false claims agains
them, which had in contact with
against
spread
through social media. Hence
, proving the dangers the internet
has brought about.
In conclusion, although
the internet
has brough
society closer and connected with each other, the take something or somebody with oneself somewhere
brought
brag
spread
of fake information has can lead to far more dangers which can be detrimental to humans. Therefore
, I believe that the internet
helps with the spread
of inaccurate news.Submitted by sansans2011 on
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