On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: • describe the item you lost • explain how you lost it • tell the insurance company what you want them to do

Dear Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform
about
Correct pronoun usage
you about

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

show examples
a lost camera and apply for the insurance amount. My policy number is cxz4525 by the name of Amanjot Singh.
Last
month, I bought a DSLR camera with Sony embossed on it and got it insured by your prestigious insurance company in case of any unfortunate circumstances.
However
, during our fortnight trip to Paris, when I was clicking photos, a thief snatched the camera and ran away. Albeit, I immediately lodged a complaint with the local police station,
unfortunately
Add a comma
,unfortunately

It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase unfortunately. Consider adding a comma.

show examples
they could not find it. As I am aware of the
Correct your spelling
fact

The word face doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

show examples
face
Correct your spelling
fact

The word face doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

show examples
that you empathize with my plight and as per the regulation I am entitled
for
Change the preposition
to

The preposition for after the adjective entitled may be incorrect. Consider changing it to another preposition.

show examples
the claim of 80% amount of the cost.
Therefore
, I would request you to send the list of documents required for the claim. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Amanjot Singh.
Submitted by amanjw01 on

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next: