Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I feel sorry to disturb your peaceful living. I have been fixing the shelf in my bedroom for about a week, not knowing that it makes
terrible noise
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a terrible noise
to
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in
your
room
. Thank you to let me know that. I am really sorry for making an uncomfortable situation for you. It must be a hard
time
for you to
taking
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take
care of the children especially when they are sleeping. I will try not to make it
loud
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louder
next
time
. Maybe I will continue it when you leave the
room
. Is it possible for you to tell me the
time
that you will not be in your
room
? Could you please leave a note at my door
room
or send the message to me by
this
number 0968353314?
Therefore
, I can manage to fix it at that
time
. Don't
worry I
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worry, I
will finish it quickly in 2 days. Thank you for your understanding. You’re
sincerel
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sincere
y

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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