Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern life, many people believe that
over choice
Suggestion
over, the choice
over the choice
is becoming a phenomenon. I totally agree with
this
opinion, and
this
essay will attempt to find the reason for
this
. Many people blame the increase of options to select on our modern life and modern technology that we use to find our options for each
decision
we make. Examples of having too many choices include university options or travel options if ones use search engines as advisors to find the best
decision
.
Then
, they have to make
selection
Suggestion
a selection
selections
for
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of
one option from thousands of equivalent availabilities of choices. Not only that, the
decision
-making process
tend
Suggestion
tends
to be overwhelming with the overloaded information about the outcomes and the risks of our selection.
On the other hand
, many people would suggest many cases in which we do not have that
much
Suggestion
many
options.
For example
, if students are given an opportunity of
lifetime
Suggestion
a lifetime
to study at their desired university, they would not have a
second
thought to pick up
this
choice.
However
, I think that they are misjudged as there will always be possibilities that things could be done. Of course, some might have arrived at that
decision
immediately, but I think they had carefully
consider
Suggestion
considered
the suggestions and advice on possible outcomes from other people like family. Alternatively, some students might select or at least consider other better options if they are offered
full grant
Suggestion
a full grant
from other universities,
for instance
. In conclusion, I agree with the idea that we have too many choices. While many people find modern life as the main cause, I think that the
decision
making is complicated itself and choice overload is natural.

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