Should children go to nursery school prior to their primary studies? Share personal examples in your essay, if appliable.

These days, parents are highly influenced by educating their children from
very begining
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the very beginning
very beginning
of life. They are even forcing their loved ones to join prior
study
before they have started learning to walk. I disagree with
this
method of
study
. There are several
crusial
of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
reasons why younger
age
child
should not be enrolled
into
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in
the nursery
school
.
Firstly
, from the involvement of parent’s and family environment in the early
age
of life a
child
learns how to behave with society members which
can not
can not
cannot
be taught by teachers at the
school
.
From
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For
example, my nephew is not behaving
good
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well
enough with other relative members as she was not taught how to behave with other members of
family
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the family
.
Secondly
, separating from parents and
involvment
the act of sharing in the activities of a group
involvement
with
different group
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different groups
a different group
in the
school
can directly affect
child’s brain
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a child’s brain
the child’s brain
. At
early
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an early age
age
, kids are so much attached with their parents and spending long time without them in
this
days
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day
can bring
child
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a child
into depression and can not perform
good
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well
better
in
further
study
.
For instance
, it has been proved in a Canadian research that
major part
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the major part
of younger
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
are feeling
lack
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the lack
of interest in
study
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the study
a study
who has joined prior
study
before the primary
school
.
Finally
, in the very
younger
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young
youngest
age
,
child
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a child
the child
requires more feeding from his own mother
instead
of market food.
Unavailabilty
the quality of not being available when needed
Unavailability
for long time of the day due to the nursery long working hours may cause
physical deficiency issue
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physical deficiency issues
a physical deficiency issue
to the children. To defend against different health issues, mother milk is so much important to the
child
in early life which has been scientifically
proved
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proven
. In conclusion,
instead
of sending loved ones to early
study
it is
recommanded
push for something
recommended
that parents should look after their own children and teach them
inhouse
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in house
for better prospect of
child
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the child
a child
children
interms
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in terms
of emotions, health and behave.

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