Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should encourage to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past few decades, uses of motor vehicle for transportation has augmented in all big cities over the world which turns to immense
traffic
congestion. It is evident that cities are offering better living than
countryside
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the countryside
.
However
, I
am strongly disagree
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strongly disagree
with the statement because
this
way will compound the problem rather than solve it.
For
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In
the
first
place,
burgs
a flexible container with a single opening
bags
bugs
are struggling with the accommodation and living with current inhabitant’s
.
Accept space
.
Though cities offering good job and secured life, there is a limit to
number
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the number
of
population
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the population
that a city can house. The more the population increased the denser the accommodation,
consequently
the quality of living will go downhill.
For Instance
, Dhaka is the capital city of
Bangladesh where
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Bangladesh, where
dwelling place
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the dwelling place
become out of commission and outbreaks of pollution in each sector of basic needs
such
as foodstuff, transportation, health sector etc.
Moreover
, Increase residents in cities put sanitation system into a hazard. If migration to cities are
welcomed
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welcome
to solve unruly
traffic
congestion,
this
will give birth more basic needs and
some what
to a small degree or extent
somewhat
extent cities waste management disastrous to meet up it.
As a result
cities
become
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becomes
filthier and less healthy. While population raised government and civic authorities need to gear up the public
transport which
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transport, which
most of the time generate colossal
traffic
blocked and killed our valuable working hour.
Finally
,
Traffic
congestion
can be shrink
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can shrink
can be shrunk
without Centralization of cities in different ways. One of the focal point is to establish skilled
traffic
manpower and ensure proper utilization of laws. To conclude. I hold the firm belief that, encouraging people for city migration cannot solve the problem. Any
such
move will only worsen the quality of life in metropolises as most of them are pugnacious to meet the demand of their existing populace.
Submitted by Serhii Baraniuk on

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