Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should encourage to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the past few decades, uses of motor vehicle for transportation has augmented in all big cities over the world which turns to immense

traffic

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congestion. It is evident that cities are offering better living than

countryside

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the countryside

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, I

am strongly disagree

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strongly disagree

with the statement because

this

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way will compound the problem rather than solve it.

For

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the

first

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place,

burgs

a flexible container with a single opening

bags

bugs

are struggling with the accommodation and living with current inhabitant’s

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Though cities offering good job and secured life, there is a limit to

number

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the number

population

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the population

that a city can house. The more the population increased the denser the accommodation,

consequently

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the quality of living will go downhill.

For Instance

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, Dhaka is the capital city of

Bangladesh where

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Bangladesh, where

dwelling place

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the dwelling place

become out of commission and outbreaks of pollution in each sector of basic needs

such

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as foodstuff, transportation, health sector etc.

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, Increase residents in cities put sanitation system into a hazard. If migration to cities are

welcomed

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welcome

to solve unruly

traffic

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congestion,

this

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will give birth more basic needs and

some what

to a small degree or extent

somewhat

extent cities waste management disastrous to meet up it.

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cities

become

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becomes

filthier and less healthy. While population raised government and civic authorities need to gear up the public

transport which

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transport, which

most of the time generate colossal

traffic

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blocked and killed our valuable working hour.

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Traffic

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congestion

can be shrink

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can shrink

can be shrunk

without Centralization of cities in different ways. One of the focal point is to establish skilled

traffic

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manpower and ensure proper utilization of laws. To conclude. I hold the firm belief that, encouraging people for city migration cannot solve the problem. Any

such

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move will only worsen the quality of life in metropolises as most of them are pugnacious to meet the demand of their existing populace.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

294 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

public transportation
traffic congestion
private vehicles
urban areas
long commutes
population density
sustainable transportation
efficient transportation options
cycling lanes
pedestrian pathways
advanced transit systems
overcrowding
transportation infrastructure
urban development
pollution
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