Some people say that now we can see films on our phones and tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, movies can be seen on various platforms. People are divided in their opinion, while some hold the view that the use of portable electronic devices
such
as phones is better than going to the
cinema
, others believe that to have maximum satisfaction seeing a
movie
the
cinema
is better. In my opinion, the former is more enjoyable. Seeing a
movie
on the phone comes with great comfort and convenience. These reasons are what those in agreement with watching on phones and tablets run with. Potable gadgets can hold movies for a long period due to their storage capacity.
This
makes it readily available to the viewer at
anytime
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any time
of the day. Not only do they have autonomy to watch at a convenient time, they can
also
see movies at any location of their choice.
For instance
, I have been watching The Famous, a two
hours
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hour
American action film for three days without having to change my work schedule.
However
, those who believe that the
cinema
is the best place to enjoy
movie
do so because of the opportunity it afford people to socialize and
also
for its high quality image and audio. The
cinema
create
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creates
room for individuals to meet, share views and network. They are able to get others perspective about the
movie
being seen. Another reason for them is the quality of
image
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images
the image
an image
projected on the large screen accompanied with terrific audio, which allow them to feel involved.
For example
,
last
year at the Viva
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
Center
, I saw a
movie
which made me nearly jumped out of my seat because it felt like the actor was going to shoot me. In conclusion, I believe using portable gadgets is a better way to enjoy movies because it is convenient and there is no need going to the
cinema
.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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